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據報道，7歲的美國女孩Amy Bruce得知自己身患肺癌(lung cancer)后處于極度的痛苦之中。美國抗癌協(xié)會決定，每當Amy收到一封慰問信，就給她增加3美分的治療款。
假如你是新華中學的學生李華，請你用英文給Amy寫一封慰問信，主要內容應包括：
1.自我簡介；
2.得知的情況；
3.表示鼓勵；
4.打算為她做什么；
5.祝她早日康復。
注意：
1.信的格式已為你寫好；
2.信中不得出現你的真實情況；
3.詞數100左右；
4.請在答題卡上做答。
Dear Amy,
Yours,
滿分文(一)
Dear Amy,
Im Li Hua from Xinhua Middle School of China. Im sorry to hear that you got the lung cancer which brought you great pain. But you should realize that you are young and have a promising great future. So, stand up and fight against the disease! Im sure you will win. It is reported that the America anticancer association will donate three cents upon every comfort letter you receive. So I will tell your situation to all my friends and ask them to write to you. In that way, you will get enough money for you to be cured. Hope you can be well soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
名師點評：
本文依照要求，涵蓋了所有要點。文章使用了高中常見的句式，如Im sorry to hear that..., It is reported that...等，都比較好。作者對定語從句的使用恰到好處地修飾了文章，行文自然而通順，值得學習。
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好詞1.realize v.意識到2.promise v.允諾3.donate v.捐贈
好句1. Im sorry to hear that you got the lung cancer which brings you great pain.
我很遺憾地得知你身患肺癌，給你帶來了巨大的痛苦。
好處：which引導限制性定語從句。
2. So, stand up and fight against the disease!
因此，堅強地與疾病做斗爭吧！
Dear Amy,
My name is Li Hua, a student from Xinhua Middle School in China. I have got to know that you got lung cancer and are in great pain. Sorry to hear that. But since you are young, the disease wont be very serious and you can beat it. It is said that the more letters you receive, the more money the America anticancer association will donate. For every letter, they give three cents. So I will try as hard as possible to persuade my friends to write to you so as to help you get enough money to cure the disease. Im sure you will be OK soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
名師點評：
文章整體來說一氣呵成，銜接自然。通過諸如原因狀語從句的使用，使得文章內容飽滿，過渡自然，較好地使用了諸如but，so之類的連詞。文章使用了“the +比較級，the +比較級”的句式，十分出彩。
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好詞1. cure v.治愈2. association n.協(xié)會3.donate v.捐贈
好句1. But since you are young, the disease wont be very serious and you can beat it.
但是因為你還比較年輕，疾病不會很嚴重，你能夠戰(zhàn)勝它。
好處：since，引導原因狀語從句。
2. It is said that the more letters you receive, the more money the America anticancer association will donate.
據說你收到的信越多，美國抗癌組織捐給你的錢就越多。
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2007年4月29日上午10點到11點，全國億萬學生陽光體育活動在各地大中小學校同時舉行。江蘇省1100萬學生積極參與了這項活動。
教育部倡導學生：
●每天鍛煉一小時
●健康工作五十年
●幸福生活一輩子
請你根據以上提示，用英語準備一份發(fā)言稿，向同學們講述一下陽光體育活動的有關情況，并就高三學生是否需要每天花一小時鍛煉，談談你的看法及理由。
注意：
1.發(fā)言稿應包括以上所有信息，要有適當發(fā)揮；
2.詞數：120詞左右(發(fā)言稿的開頭和結尾已經寫好，不計入總詞數)；
3.參考詞匯：陽光體育活動 ——a national student sports program;
教育部——the Ministry of Education。
Good afternoon, everyone,
滿分文(一)
Good afternoon, everyone,
The national student sports program, waged by the Ministry of Education and aimed at improving students health, was held from 10：00am~11:00am on April 29，2007 in many primary and middle schools all over China. Almost 11 million students in Jiangsu province participated in this program.
The Ministry of Education advocates that we do exercises for one hour a day and can work healthily for 50 years. Our whole life will be very enjoyable.
In my opinion, we senior high school students should do exercises for one hour a day even though our spare time is limited. Health is a basic condition for our study. If we did not do exercises, we wouldnt be able to get good study records. So every one of you, join the program now!
Thank you!
名師點評：
本文的結構十分明晰，同時句式使用得熟練而準確。本文分為三段，前兩段敘述，后一段發(fā)表觀點，典型的作文結構。在句式使用上，作者用法多樣，使用了獨立結構和虛擬語氣，十分出彩。復雜的句式是本文的特點之一。
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好詞1.wage v.發(fā)動2.aim v.瞄準3. advocate v.提倡
好句1. The Ministry of Education advocates that we do exercises for one hour a day and can work healthily for 50 years.
教育部提倡我們每天做一個小時的運動，能夠健康地活50年。
好處：advocate，其后接虛擬語氣，可以省略情態(tài)動詞。
2. If we did not do exercises, we wouldnt be able to get good study records.
如果我們不進行運動，我們的學習成績就不會很好。
Good afternoon, everyone,
Its my honor to be here to give you a speech. On April 29，2007 the national student sports program was held from 10∶00am~11∶00am in many primary and middle schools all over China. It is the Ministry of Education that promotes this program. In Jiangsu, about 11 milloin students took part in the activity.
The theme of this program is “do exercises for one hour per day, work for 50 years healthily and lead a happy life”. In my viewpoint, this is quite good for us senior students. We do exercises one hour a day and we can gain health, which lay a solid foundation for our future. That will be very good. So boys and girls，come and join us now!
Thank you!
名師點評：
文章的結構很清楚，內容和要點把握得也比較完整。本文十分符合演講稿的要求，寫得比較出色。第一段中用了強調句，指出了發(fā)起項目的主體。作者用并列的方式解釋了主題，十分出色。定語從句也用的很好、很到位。
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好詞1. promote v.促進2. foundation n.基礎3. gain v.獲得
好句1. It is the Ministry of Education that promotes this program.
是教育部推動了這個計劃。
好處：強調句的使用十分準確。
2. We do exercises one hour a day and we can gain health, which lay a solid foundation for our future.
每天鍛煉一小時我們的身體就會很健康，而這也為將來打下了堅實的基礎。
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在英語課堂上，你喜歡你的老師授課時只用英語，還是英語、漢語兼用？某英語雜志社就此話題邀請中學生發(fā)表看法。請你圍繞“How do you prefer your English classes to be taught? In English, or in both English and Chinese?”這個問題，選擇一種授課形式，寫一篇英語短文。
授課形式一：只用英語
優(yōu)點：有助于提高聽說能力等
缺憾：不易聽懂等
結論：……授課形式二：英語、漢語兼用
優(yōu)點：易于理解等
缺憾：英語氛圍不濃等
結論：……
注意：詞數100~120，短文開頭已給出(不計詞數)。
參考詞匯：atmosphere氛圍。
滿分文(一)
I prefer my English classes to be taught in both English and Chinese, whose advantage is that it is easy for us to understand what the teacher talks about. The teacher first teaches the class in English, and then she explains those that are hard to understand to us so that we get a better knowing of the passage. That will be good for us.
However, teaching the class in two languages will make the English atmosphere not so strong. Some students who wish to be taught in English will be disappointed.
Except for the disadvantage, I think it is really good to hear two languages in classes. It can make us more familiar with the foreign culture.
名師點評：
審題是作文的第一要素，本文的審題準確無誤。無論是要點的把握還是結構的組織都證明了這一點。本文運用多種復雜句式，整體看來是不錯的。文中的一個復合句式顯示了作者的英語功底。其他出彩短語的使用也很地道，可以參看好句中的分析。
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好詞1.advantage n.優(yōu)點2.be familiar with，對某人熟悉3. atmosphere n.氣氛
好句1. I prefer my English classes to be taught in both English and Chinese, whose advantage is that it is easy for us to understand what the teacher talks about.
我更喜歡采用雙語教學，其優(yōu)點是可以更好地理解老師的話。
好處：定語從句很好地組織了復雜句，同時prefer等詞組的使用很地道。
2. Some students who wish to be taught in English will be disappointed.
那些希望英語授課的學生們可能會失望了。
I prefer my English classes to be taught only in English because it is helpful for us to improve the ability of speaking and listening in a very short time. I have strong interest in English study and foreign culture, so Id like to be totally immersed in the atmosphere of English so that I can quickly make progress. Thats why I prefer total English. However, since we are all English beginners, its really hard to understand all that the teacher says. Sometimes we need Chinese explanation. So my viewpoint is that we are taught not only in English but also using Chinese as a minor way to explain things that are hard to understand.
名師點評：
本文寫作十分成功。語言和句式是本文最大的特點。好詞中詞匯的使用，將作者的意思表達得完整而準確，從而映襯了詞匯的重要性；其次，本文的句式以復雜句為主，表語、定語和狀語從句的使用都十分到位。
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好詞：1. immerse v.沉浸2. explanation n.解釋3. make progress 取得進步
好句：1. I have strong interest in English study and foreign culture, so Id like to be totally immersed in the atmosphere of English so that I can quickly make progress.
我對英語學習和外國文化有著濃厚的興趣，因此我想沉浸在英語的學習氛圍中，使得我能更快地進步。
好處：be immersed in 沉浸其中；so that 表示目的。
2. So my viewpoint is that we are taught not only in English but using Chinese as a minor way to explain things that are hard to understand.
因此，我的觀點是，用英文教授，同時對于一些難以理解的內容用中文進行輔助講解。
好處：表語從句使用正確。
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